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Tariq

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A Fan Poem
« on: December 29, 2017, 03:37:18 PM »
Hello all....after watching the band (and crowd!) at a recent gig, I was inspired to write the below and am sharing it here in the hope some of you can relate to it, or at least be slightly charmed by it's amateurish approach...!

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The dry ice drifts and the tension lifts
In a swirl of smoke and outstretched hands
 
The silhouettes they arm themselves
And open fire
 
We open our chests and take each beautiful bullet
Right through the heart
 
In the embrace of melody and emotion
You can get transported in your mind
 
Do you remember when there used to be nothing between us and the stage?
So close that we’d stare up, daring to dream that it could be us one day
 
But tonight there’s a sea of people between us   
So we find a corner and I’ll spin you around
As if doing it faster and faster will twirl us through time
Back to those days
 
When we used to promise each other that if we ever had two children
We’d call them Thunder and Consolation
As we guide them through the crowd now
I laugh and think “thank God we never did”
 
Me, I’ve brought many to worship at this alter
But sacrificed them all
They come for answers but always leave asking….
“Why can’t you feel that same passion for me?”

A question left fading with the echo of the crowd in an empty hall.

But if the singer can still hit those high notes
Then so can our love
If the driving drums still pound like thunder
So can our hearts

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Re: A Fan Poem
« Reply #1 on: December 29, 2017, 04:06:55 PM »
Danke
I wasn`t able to travel to cologne this year because of a bad cold, but the fire to follow a lot of people don`t understand ist still burning inside
And me, I`ve got a black place in my heart
Still got this hole in me
Perhaps - I am the master of nothing?

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Re: A Fan Poem
« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2017, 04:36:48 PM »
nicely done Tariq  :)
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Re: A Fan Poem
« Reply #3 on: December 29, 2017, 06:29:06 PM »
Well done Tariq. Thanks for posting this  :)
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Re: A Fan Poem
« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2018, 07:13:59 AM »
 :) Thank you for sahring your peom with us, Tariq!

It certainly rings true.  :)

Tariq

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Re: A Fan Poem
« Reply #5 on: January 03, 2018, 09:37:13 AM »
Thanks guys!

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Re: A Fan Poem
« Reply #6 on: January 26, 2018, 08:28:08 PM »
A great poem an nma gig is certainly a unique experience, I like to think that bit of anarchy for a couple of hours keeps me going in a world where we have to conform and get on with shit.

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Re: A Fan Poem
« Reply #7 on: January 27, 2018, 02:15:02 PM »
It's a nice poem. I think it could be fantastic if NMA fans shared their emotions and experiences in form of poems. All kinds of expressive art deeply appreciated.
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