hey anna,
thank you for your insightful comment!
though all the points you mentioned are the obvious things i also was thinking about, it is very helpful to get another opinion. my approach was to make it blurry and "dreamlike", also to "hide" some things, because the footage is bad (my fault) but when you say it's hard to see what's going on, then you're right and it makes me think about that those who want information also want to see what's going on;-)
Maybe you also need to include a bit more "frenzied" dancing to up the tempo a bit and maybe drive a bit more interest.
This is also a very helpful observation and good to have that opinion, because my friend wanted to have some more calm images of people relaxing, so opinions are different and i don't know how to realize them. damn those clients and their ideas;-)
As i said, this is a work in progress and it's difficult for me, because i have to implement the ideas of my friend and what he wants to see and we cannot edit together, because of 400km distance between us.
He gave me music for the project but it didn't flow with my rhythm and the ideas i had in mind and then suddenly born feral came to my mind and i just tried it out and i feel it works well with the trancetanz concept.
And this made him curious about new model army and after lietening to the whole song he bought a ticket for the cologne show this year. so at least one good thing has already come out of this work;-)
Aber schön, dass es deine Neugier ein wenig wecken konnte:-)
@Master Ray
I always envisioned you as exactly the guy, who is chanting "Om" loudly, blindfolds himself and dances erratically with wild spread waving arms on his white socks to sitar music, shouting: "hell yeah, i feel good. give me more of that stuff!"

This blindfold dancing is also not my thing and i know exactly what you mean. My function is to film that and make a little clip for my friends website.
I think we will re-do and re-shoot everything when i have moved, so that i can work more closely with my friend and better understand what he wants.